Death to All Prologues (Sorta)


Death to all prologues except this one. We have to have this one.

Quick! How many stories can you think of that begin with a prologue? Books or movies, it doesnt matter. Just spend a minute making a list.


Now tell me how many of those actually needed that prologue. My guess is around ten percent. And Im being generous.

Thats not fair, protest. These stories need that information. Its backstory! It sets things up!

Hey, I said that ten percent of those stories actually needed a prologue! Give me a break.

Heres the deal: Prologues very often are concerned with telling us the backstory. The question you must answer as a storyteller is, do we need to know all that backstory now?

Most of the time, the answer is no.

I like to hold up the movie Inkheart here. In the prologue, were told that certain storytellers can read characters and objects out of books. Were told these people are called silvertongues, and then were sent right into the opening of the actual story.

The problem is theres nothing in that prologue that doesnt come out in the story later. Were eventually introduced to all the concepts of reading things out of books in much more interesting and memorable ways throughout the film. You could easily skip the prologue and not even notice.

Sometimes we dont even need to know the information in the prologue at all. One of my favorite examples of a prologue that didnt need to be there is in the book and movie City of Ember. The story opens by telling us how the world ended. Humanity was moved underground without a knowledge of its past and given a mysterious box that would open in 200 years.

Theres just one problem with this prologue. Its telling you a lot of information that none of the characters youre going to meet will ever know.


Death to prologues! Pew! Pew!

Think how much more compelling this story would be if wed simply been presented with a run-down underground city. Is there a way out? Nobody knowsnot the characters, not the audience. Is there even somewhere else to go? Its a mystery. Now were discovering alongside the characters that theres a world outside of Ember. And thats a whole lot more interesting.

After all, City of Ember is essentially a mystery. But in one short prologue, the ending has been ruined. Yes, theres a way out. Yes, theres more to the world than Ember. Yes, our heroes will find it.

How dull.

Contrast this with the movie The Village, where were presented with an isolated 19th-century country village with some odd customs and a rule about never leaving. We know theres got to be something more to it, but it’s a big, big mystery.

Instead of spoiling the story in a prologue, were shown glimpses and hints of backstory as the main character comes closer and closer to unraveling whats going on. Then, when it all comes together, were treated to a fantastic reveal. The film does a brilliant job of keeping its mystery mysterious. It would have been ruined with a City of Ember-style prologue.

Now, lest I lead you to believe that prologues are absolutely unnecessary at all times, let me quickly tell you that this is not the case. There are actually times where a prologue can be used very well.

In fact, both Inkheart and City of Ember were probably trying to cover this next point: A good prologue should be used to set the tone of the rest of the story. Remember that the very first thing in your story sets that feel for the rest. If you open with fighting, wed better have some more of that later. If you start with a quiet, comfortable tea party, things had better stay similarly cozy even when the conflict starts. You can’t bring out swords and guns; it has to stay prim and proper.

One of my favorite examples of a well-set tone in a prologue is the movie Waking Ned Devine. The film opens with a documentary narrator voice telling us about people playing the lottery. But suddenly, the voice breaks character and remarks regarding those who actually win, Lucky sods.And from that moment on, we’re hooked.

Its perfectly brilliant. We get the setup of people playing the lottery, day in and day out, always losing. It feels boring, like this routine should, but then we get to those last two words. The narrator seems to wink as he says it, and we realize that this movie is not going to take itself too seriously. Nor does it.

Then there are prologues that tell the audience information they will need to know so the story will make sense. For example, in the movie Tangled, if you dont know that Rapunzel was stolen from her parents as a child, youre not going to care much about this rebellious teen who runs away. But because we were told in the prologue that she was kidnapped, we already want her escape from the witch. When she does, we cheer and wait expectantly for her to discover the truth.

I can see you nodding your head. Okay, there are good prologues, and there are bad prologues. I understand the difference. But what about those stories with no prologue at all?


What about the force? Do you believe that exists?

Rather like ROUSs, I dont believe they exist.

I know, now you think Im crazy. Stay with me a minute and Ill explain.

Heres where you might be confused: A lot of stories have a prologue that is labeled. In books, youre used to reading a little section called Prologue. In films, you expect to be greeted by a voiceover. Either way, weve been trained to recognize blatant prologues.

But those are just the ones that weve been told to notice. Dig a little deeper and youll find that prologues dont have to be labeled to exist.

Its pretty simple once you know how to spot it. A prologue is something that happens to set up the world or situation of the story. It can seamlessly move into the main story, or it can have more separation.

For example, in the book 100 Cupboard, theres no labeled prologue section. However, if you read the first chapter carefully, youll find that the story doesnt actually begin until a couple paragraphs down the second page. All before that, the author gives us a some details on the town of Henry, Kansas. Until the book shifts focus to the Willis family waiting on the curb for a bus, were in prologue land.

Heres another one: The movie The Kings Speech doesnt have a blatant prologue. The first thing we see is a title screen explaining that were about to see Prince Berties first speech. Then were greeted with a montage of preparations for making a public address. Were shown the contrast between the polished radio announcers calm dignity and Berties unease.

After Bertie steps to the microphone and fails miserably at speechmaking, everything has been set up. The next scene is where the story really begins as Bertie tries speech therapy, which is what well be spending the rest of the film exploring. But to get to that point, we had to know what he wants to become. And that was the prologue.

So how does this apply to you, the storyteller? Now that you know youll have a prologue whether you label it or not, your task is to own your prologue. Ask yourself if this information needs to be here, or if the story would be more interesting without it. Use your craft to make sure the prologue does its job setting up the story and striking an appropriate tone.

And Im sorry, but after reading this, you might just end up like megritting your teeth every time you see a movie with a voiceover prologue.

NOTE: Due to the difficultly of finding a visual representation for “prologue” the editor has instead chosen to pepper this post with Star Wars images which may or may not be relevant. We apologize for any inconvenience or distress this apparent randomness may have caused.


Death to All Prologues (Sorta) — 2 Comments

  1. In several, perhaps most, of the novel drafts I’ve begun, I’ve noticed I tend to write opening scenes with strongly different tone and content from what follows; calling the opening scene a “prologue” seems somewhat more reasonable than making a sharp discontinuity between “Chapter 1” and the rest of the book(-to-be).

    In one case, however, I see essentially no way around making a prologue. My (very tentative) logline is “When a coddled princess realizes the recent apocalypse was her fault and is given a chance to relive and change her past, she must prepare herself, her friends, and her country for the danger she knows is coming,” and the prologue (which I keep trying to revise to shorten) covers the nature of the apocalypse, how it could be her fault, her realization, and her prayer. If I could make the story work without a prologue, I’d like to, but I just don’t see any way.

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